34 Writing to Make an Argument with Research (Section Overview)
Sunayani Bhattacharya
Learning Objectives
By the end of this chapter, you will be able to
- Understand the steps necessary to create an argument based on research
- Design a research prompt
- Research a topic
- Create an annotated bibliography
Revisit: What is Embodied Rhetorics? (Insert link to Embodied Rhetorics chapter)
In most aspects of our lives, we are asked to understand and analyze arguments. This might be while we are discussing the relative merits of a TV show with friends, convincing one’s family to be allowed to study the major of one’s choice, or deciding between brands for similar products—we come across arguments all the time.
When it comes to writing, the arguments we make in an essay need support. Just like listing all the reasons why our favorite sports team is the best, and backing those reasons with well-researched statistics, writing an argumentative research essay also needs these two things:
- A well-phrased and clearly comprehensible claim or an argument.
- Credible research to support the above point.
As you move through the process of forming and researching an argument, remember to think about composition as an act that is performed by you as a body living in the world. This will affect how you select your topic, find relevant sources, and develop the final paper. For example, how does the topic intersect with your various identity positions? Are you drawn more to certain kinds of supporting evidence because of your own literacy experiences? Are you making conscious and unconscious stylistic choices based on how you are viewed as an embodied individual by social and cultural institutions? The final product you write will be a sum of these interactions that you have with the world.
Invitations to Read, Reflect, and Write
In this introduction to the section “Writing to Make an Argument with Research,” we invite you to read some sample rhetorical analysis essays from other Saint Mary’s College students. We have also included some invitations to write, shared by writing professors at Saint Mary’s College.
Student Writing
We would like to include student writing in this section. If you are interested in publishing your work, please fill out this form and submit a piece of your writing from your writing class. We will work with you to get it published.
Here are some articles written by students and published at other universities. We think you’ll find these mentor texts useful:
- Black Language, Black Rhetoric, and Multimodal Storytelling in J. Cole’s Music [New Tab] by Will DiSalvo
Writer’s Statement [New Tab] - Medical Influencers: A Rhetorical Analysis of TikTok’s Genre Features [New Tab] by Keziah Olajide
Writer’s Statement [New Tab] - An Analysis of the Different Starbucks Menu Formats and Evaluating Their Accessibility [New Tab] by Elizabeth King
Writer’s Statement [New Tab] - Dungeons and Dragons: Adventure, Magic, and Analysis of the Community Genres [New Tab] by Aaliyah Saint Charles
Writer’s Statement [New Tab] - The Rhetoric of Riot Grrrl Zines [New Tab] by Varalika Chari
Writer’s Statement [New Tab] - Exploring the Rhetoric of Contemporary Black Female Rap within the Context of Social Discourse and Identity [New Tab] by Megan Felder
Invitations to write: Research Project Assignment Prompts
The chapters in this section should prepare you for completing one of these summative writing assignments. These examples are assignments that we recommend.
Assignment Example #1
Write a Research-based Argument Paper. Building off the 5 pages that you wrote for your Research Proposal, you will take a stance on your issue and write a research argument (an additional 7 pages) that attempts to answer the question posed in your Research Proposal. In doing so, you will combine your primary findings—analyses of genres, interviews, observations, and/or surveys—with the secondary research gathered in the WP # 1 and the WP # 2. Therefore, the main focus for this Research Paper (12 pages in length when combined with the writing you did for WP # 2) will be writing an additional 7 pages to complete the findings, discussion, and conclusion sections.
Step 1: Understanding Arguments
Before we embark on writing an argumentative piece, we need to think about the following in relation to any text that is making an argument.
The Logic of the Argument:
- What is the topic or theme?
- What is the claim being made?
- Are the claims being developed?
- How are they being supported and developed?
The Credibility Question
- Why should one listen to this author?
- Does the text offer counterarguments?
The Significance
- Is the argument presented in a way that evokes a response from the reader? Is the reader made to care?
- Is this coming from the text’s tone? Use of evidence? Structure? Style of writing? Something else?
- Does the text’s genre make a difference to how significant the argument seems?
Analyze Essay Outlines
Step 2: Forming an Argument
- Read the assignment prompt closely and read it several times. Does it specify the kind of argument you should make, or the audience you should address? What does it say about the research process, and the kind and number of sources you need?
- Begin with an idea you care about. This might seem like a simple and fairly obvious starting place, but it is an important one. If you are not interested in the topic, you are likely to not find compelling research, and your reader is going to sense your disinterest in your writing. Google and Wikipedia are often good places to start.
- Narrow the topic to something that is manageable. This will depend on the research prompt, but the idea is that you want to argue something that can be explained, developed, supported, and countered within the space of a few pages.
- Draft and redraft the claim you wish to make. Think about how you might explain the claim to the following audiences
- Someone in your class who knows the parameters of the assignment but does not know much about your topic
- Someone knowledgeable about the topic who agrees with your perspective
- Someone who is knowledgeable about the topic but disagrees with you
- Once you have your topic and argument, do some initial research using Google and Wikipedia to see what kinds of sources might be available, and if the claim can be further narrowed down.
Designing a Research Topic
Step 3: The Research Process, Finding Sources
Types of sources—Depending on what the research assignment asks for, you could consider the following kinds or types of sources:
- Peer-reviewed academic publications: These are typically seen as the most credible of all academic sources. They might be in the form of books, articles, edited or multipart volumes, or online resources.
- Reports, articles, and books from credible non-academic sources: These are often helpful for very recent events which have not yet had time enough to be written about in peer-reviewed formats. They can be newspapers, magazines, blogs, popular books, or policy documents.
- Short pieces from periodicals or credible websites: These are often short reports in publications that present facts rather than long-form analyses. They are still considered credible, and usually have a byline or are attributed to a named individual.
- Agenda-driven or pieces from unknown sources: While these are very helpful in identifying topics or finding positions taken on topics, they are usually not clearly attributed to an author. They might also be too vague or be so partisanal as to be not reliable.
Worth remembering: not all sources are written words. You might be able to find audio or visual sources that are just as credible and compelling.
Identifying Sources for Research
Step 4: The Research Process, Putting the Sources Together
Once you have the sources, you need to categorize and sort them into an annotated bibliography. This will also help you evaluate the sources and rethink how you might use them in the essay. The process should happen partly before you start drafting the essay, and partly during as you rewrite and revise sections of the essay. And before you do anything else, remind yourself of your argument—what is it that you are claiming in this essay? Write this out on a separate piece of paper, and have that handy as you collate your sources.
- Each source should be first entered in the form of a citation, such as MLA or APA. Follow the citation convention mentioned in the essay prompt.
- The citation should be followed by a couple of brief (100 – 200 words) paragraphs summarizing the main ideas articulated in the source. You do not have to be exhaustive, and in fact your summary should be in line with your own argument.
- The final part of the annotated bibliography should be a few sentences explaining why this source is important for your argument, and you will be using it in the paper (think Background Evidence Argument Method, or BEAM).
Sample annotated bibliography entry (from Anna Mills’ How Arguments Work: A Guide to Writing and Analyzing Texts in College)
Morey, Darcy F. “Burying Key Evidence: the Social Bond between Dogs and People.” [New Tab] Journal of Archaeological Science, vol. 33, no. 2, Feb. 2006, pp. 158–175., doi:https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jas.2005.07.009.
In this article, Morey documents the widespread human practice of burying domesticated dogs and questions what this practice can reveal about relationships between the two. He argues that dog burials have been more frequent and more consistent than burials of other types of animals, suggesting that humans have invested dogs with spiritual and personal identities. Morey also demonstrates that the study of dog burials can help scholars to more accurately date the domestication of dogs; thus, he challenges scholars who rely solely on genetic data in their dating of domestication to consider more fully the importance of archaeological finds. To support his arguments, Morey provides detailed data on the frequency, geographic and historical distribution, as well as modes of dog burials and compares the conclusions he draws from this data to those found by scholarship based on genetic data. He is also a well-known anthropology scholar and Ph.D candidate at the University of Wyoming. This article is useful to a literature review on the domestication of dogs because it persuasively shows the importance of using burial data in dating dog domestication and explains how use of this data could change assessments of when domestication occurred. I will likely use it to develop my first body paragraph.
Works Cited
Abbanat, Cherie Miot. Argumentation and Communication. Creative Commons Attribution Non-Commercial Share Alike
Mills, Anna. How Arguments Work: A Guide to Writing and Analyzing Texts in College, Creative Commons Attribution Non-Commercial