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2 Embodied Rhetorics: A Deeper Literacy Narrative (Section Overview)

Meghan A Sweeney

Learning Objectives

By the end of this section on writing to share an experience, you will be able to

  • Write a literacy narrative that critically reflects on your multiple identities in relation to reading and/or writing

Revisit: What is Embodied Rhetorics? (Insert link to Embodied Rhetorics chapter)

Before we begin, please reflect on your literacy history in 100 words or more.

Literacy narrative reflection

Literacy narratives can prove useful for college students to write for several reasons. On a very practical level, narratives are a type of writing and speaking that are so human that they are used in almost every discipline or major on a campus. We speak in narratives when explaining ourselves, conducting work in a laboratory, completing projects, or sharing experiences in internships. It’s also integral to many disciplines like history, where narratives of past events are constructed through collections of primary sources.

Aside from the very practical, literacy narratives also offer college students the opportunity to reflect on and critically examine their past experiences with reading and writing so as to adjust their current identities and relationships to literacy. How we identify as readers and writers in the past affects us as readers and writers into the future. However, by critically examining how identities foisted upon us or embraced by us affect our relationships with literacy, we can adjust our literate identities.

Here we can deepen our understanding of our literacy experiences by also integrating embodiment into our consideration. As we remember from chapter 1, we are all embodied, as we have a body. And that body is connected to different places, times, and cultures. As a result, the process of orienting our bodies in space and among others creates our experiences and knowledge. How we make meaning of our worlds is embodied as it is based in the lived experiences of our past and present, of our body negotiating space among others (Moeller and Knoblauch).

So, how does the concept of intersectional identities and lived experiences from our embodiment connect to literacy narratives? A good example can be found in the literacy narrative by HP, published in Stylus.  In “Carrying the Weight of a Nation: The Story of a Guatemalan Boy,” HP tells the story of his experience. His story begins with difficulties in kindergarten with multilingualism, as he spoke Spanish at home with his family from Guatemala. A few years after challenging himself to learn English, his apartment was raided by police, and his father, who could not acquire legal paperwork to make his immigration legal, was deported. His dad was HP’s biggest supporter when it came to his education, so losing him at this young age affected HP and HP’s literacy education deeply.

This example provides a glimpse into how lived experiences, our embodied experiences, affect our literacies. HP’s body oriented in space and in relation to others: his dad, the officers, the teachers in school. And these relations intersect with race, gender, and class. Some students do not share the experience of losing a parent to immigration officers or have to worry about it. This is HP’s lived experience. Later in his literacy narrative, he begins to lose his identity as a Hispanic student, as his fluency in English begins to supplant his fluency in Spanish. As well, his education results in his being labeled as “white-washed” by his own family. These experiences are unique to HP and are also shared among other students moving through their own literate experiences.

In this introduction to the chapter on writing to share our experiences, we invite you to read some sample literacy narratives from other Saint Mary’s College students, reflect on your own experiences to begin your writing journey. We have also included some invitations to write shared by writing professors at Saint Mary’s College.

Student writing

We would like to include student writing in this section.  If you are interested in publishing your work, please fill out this form and submit a piece of your writing from your writing class. We will work with you to get it published.

Here are some literacy narratives written by students and published at other universities. We think you’ll find these mentor texts useful:

After reading one, or more, of the sample literacy narratives, take some time to reflect on how you connect to their experiences in the space below in 100 words or more.

Reflecting on our lived experiences and identities

 

Now that you have had some time to read examples and think about your own experiences, we invite you to write more extensively about your literate experiences.

Invitations to write: Literacy Narrative Assignment Prompts

The chapters in this section should prepare you for completing one of these summative writing assignments. These examples are assignments that we recommend.
Assignment Example #1

Reflect upon your own bodily experience as a reader, writer, or language learner and identify one experience or event where the awareness of your physical body played a key role in your developing literacy about the extent of the privileged/unprivileged position you hold in our world. In doing so, consider the culturally accepted cisgendered, male, white, and able-bodied point of view and your own body’s position within this dominant discourse.  What did you learn and how? What impact has it had on your life?

Assignment Example #2

Background

Academic and public writing often require that we use narrative to make an argument. We narrate lab reports in science (although in a unique way). We narrate historical, social, and cultural events in many social science disciplines like sociology, history, and communication. I could keep going. For this first essay, we will get practice using narrative as a tool for sharing our literate experiences. We will first reflect on our experiences, sponsors, and languages. By taking this time to reflect on our literacy history, we can better understand how our literacy has been shaped by many factors, including home language(s), class, race, gender, geography, ability, backgrounds, and more.

Task

The purpose of a literacy narrative is to understand how your past literacy experiences shape your current literacies by telling a story about your literacy history and analyzing the significance of the story.  For this writing project, write a narrative in which you describe an event or experience that had a significant impact on you as a reader or writer. The narrative should be 3 full pages or more.

There’s no one tone and style for a literacy narrative: they can be serious, funny, informal, formal, poetic, angry, or celebratory. In short, you can use language; all of it. Finally, we will also be reading texts that invite you to think critically about code meshing. I encourage you to code mesh in this essay if that seems helpful to you and your writing.

Works Cited

HP. “Carrying the Weight of a Nation: The Story of a Guatemalan Boy.” Stylus. 11(1). https://cah.ucf.edu/writingrhetoric/stylus/issues/11-2/carrying-the-weight-of-a-nation-the-story-of-a-guatemalan-boy/

Moeller, Marie E., and A. Abby Knoblauch. “1. Introduction: Bodies, Embodiments, and Embodied Rhetorics.” Bodies of Knowledge: Embodied Rhetorics in Theory and Practice. Utah State University Press, 2022. pp. 3-20.

 

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